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critique on a sitting dragon

hello :)
I am searching for a critique on the pose of this dragon. I am unsure if it is right or wrong (the same with the little wolf.
If you have decissions that may make the coloring better please also let me know.
I would not like to start this picture completely new, so critiques that help saving this picture are prefered :)

Thank you for the help

Ooh! It looks great! I wonder what that dragon's thinking...

I don't have time to really do any sort of in-depth critique, but my first impression when I saw this was that he looks like a huge, heavy, powerful beast the way you've drawn him with such thick legs and broad sauropodian chest. But as such his wings seem a bit inadequate to support such a massive body (even if his bones are hollow like a birds - that's a lot of muscle bulk). Is there a way at this stage that you could increase the size of the wings? Maybe double what they are now?

http://www.zbrushcentral.com/zbc/attachment.php?attachmentid=78029
http://www.elfwood.com/farp/dragons/dhroar.jpg

thank you Hrath ^^

thank you Vizon
I changed the wing a little. I made them bigger. Is this big enough?
I am unsure how the other wing has to look like.
The blue lines shoul symbol this. Is it okay like that?
(sorry for the bad english)